What Lime Marmalade teaches us about Character Development
When I signed up a while ago for Elana Johnson's Great Blogging Experiment it never occurred to me that the earth would continue to revolve around the sun and the due date of September 24th would arrive. The experiment is to have as many bloggers as possible weigh in on character development. Neither did it occur to me when I signed up that I would be sick on this day (due to the inhaling of communal air on the bus, at work, at grocery stores etc.). So my contribution is an early blog post that many of my current bloggowers may not have seen (in the parlance of sitcom re-runs 'it's new to you').
I would encourage you to check out the great blog experiment and get full up on character development!
Here's my offering:
A few years ago I traveled to London, England to visit my friend Kate and go to her 40th birthday party. Kate and I met in West Africa in the late 80s. So I hopped over the pond and we had a marvelous reunion.
Kate is a nurse so she’s one of those caring, nurturing types. I stayed in the attic bedroom, it was very Whatever Happened to Baby Jane? – it even had the wooden stairs that you pull out of the ceiling from the second floor.
I would encourage you to check out the great blog experiment and get full up on character development!
Here's my offering:
A few years ago I traveled to London, England to visit my friend Kate and go to her 40th birthday party. Kate and I met in West Africa in the late 80s. So I hopped over the pond and we had a marvelous reunion.
Kate is a nurse so she’s one of those caring, nurturing types. I stayed in the attic bedroom, it was very Whatever Happened to Baby Jane? – it even had the wooden stairs that you pull out of the ceiling from the second floor.
The second day I was there Kate woke me up from my jet lagged induced coma. Sun was streaming in through the small attic window, which I had tried desperately to open at about 4 a.m. (but apparently they lock down everything in London).
Kate: Here’s some tea and toast with marmalade (she plopped it down on the table beside the bed).
Me: Oh, no, I don’t like marmalade.
Kate: Eat it anyway and shuuuuddddduppppp about it!
With that Kate turned, her long flowing robe spun in the breeze, and stomped down the attic stairs. Okay, there was no breeze. It was hot and stuffy and there was no air in that attic. Did I mention she’s a caring and nurturing nurse?
So I ate the toast with lime marmalade and loooooovvvvved it.
I loved it so much I wanted it the next day. But it seemed Kate had scrapped the dregs of the jar for me and there was none left. I offered to buy a new jar but Kate didn’t want sugary marmalade in the house to tempt her once I’d left. I knew enough not to buy a glass jar with the stickiest substance in the world in it, and then pack it in my suitcase to take home. Surly, I could find it back in Canada.
When I got home I scoured the supermarkets for it. Lots of lemon and orange marmalade but no lime. It had to be lime. I went to the British store and found it. I had to sell a kidney to pay for the outrageous cost of it being imported from England, but it was worth it. I took that jar home and had toast with lime marmalade until it was done (which took months). Then I was done and haven’t eaten it since.
Characters revels themselves through action and dialogue. Put your characters into situations that stretch them and make them feel uncomfortable. How they cope with the situation – through action and dialogue – reveals their character to the reader.
In Dead Bird through the Cat Door, the second in the Megabyte Mystery Series which will be out this fall, characters Cyd and Jane are faced with lunch with the evil culprits and are served such Scottish fare as blood pudding and haggis. How they react shows more about their character than me telling you what type of kids they are.
In Dead Bird through the Cat Door, the second in the Megabyte Mystery Series which will be out this fall, characters Cyd and Jane are faced with lunch with the evil culprits and are served such Scottish fare as blood pudding and haggis. How they react shows more about their character than me telling you what type of kids they are.
What did my obsessive search for Lime Marmalade tell you about me as a character? Maybe I was just trying to stave off scurvy?
Comments
I love you for it though, this was extremely creative and an excellent play on characters. Food and writing mixed together, always a wonderful combination!
Awesome comparison.
Red Boot pearl - I wasn't a fan of the orange either, but lime is a world of its own!
Thanks Melissa and sorry, you're not the only one who I've led to crave lime marmalade!
Nancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author
Thanks Sandra. I think a trip to England is well in order!
What I want to know is why you never ate it again, hmm?
and thanks for the tip, Jan! You make an excellent point. :o)
Thanks for the post!